11 steps forward, 5 steps back

posted by flowdeeps on 2009.04.03, under News
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I ripped out 5 pages of dialogue from my script this morning and lost a character in the process.
It reads very much more like a fairy tale now.
I’ll miss my brain-damaged toilet-monikered hero Doulton though.

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Let’s have a read then…

cole ( April 9, 2009 at 1:30 pm )

You’ll have to wait Cole, I’m having a solid weekend of writing to get more of it out.

flowdeeps ( April 9, 2009 at 1:55 pm )

OK, a version, not THE version I ended with but the latest one I can find, is now online.

flowdeeps ( February 1, 2010 at 12:08 am )

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